I. Rhetorical overview of the
audience
1.) Bernhardt wrote this article to
explain the importance of visual text and how readers connect to this style of
writing.
2a.) This article is towards teachers
and people who educate students. Bernhardt talks about how visual text is an
important tool for for teachers to teach students which leads me to believe he
is talking to teachers and not to students
2b.) Thesis: "A text can be seen, must be seen, in a process which is
essentially different from the perception of speech".
II. Summary
1.) In Steven A. Bernhardt's article
"Seeing the Text", he explains how using visual imagery can
help readers better understand the material while
still effectively getting the point across to the audience.
He says that visual texts always needs headings for the reader to understand
the material. There are many different ways in which someone can use visual
text; such as power points, brochures, etc.
2.) Tweet: Visual learning is an
effective way to communicate to different audiences rather than boring text
#English1510 #Bernhardt
III. Assigned Exercises
QDJ
1.) Bernhardt characterizes the
typical classroom essay as consisting of “full, declarative sentences, arranged
in paragraphs with low visual identity” (36). Do you struggle with generating
or reading this conventional, low-visual type of writing? Why or why not?
A: I personally do struggle when it
comes to reading articles that are low-visual types of writing. Im a very
visual learner and when a text has only a small amount of visual writing the
message of the article does not get to me like the visual type of writing does.
I like to picture things in my head when reading or
have visual examples of what I'm reading rather then just reading
information that is layed out in front of me.
AEI
I. Rhetorical Overview of the Article
1. Bryson’s exigence is to promote the
idea that following English rules constantly is not a necessity since the rules
are constantly changing.
2a.The audience is Brysons peers that either
work with him or are other educators because he uses the word “we” several
times which suggests that he is speaking to people that are on the same level
as he is when it comes to experience in the English field.
2b. He would have to dull down his vocabulary
use while also using the word “you” more frequently to make a connection to
people my own age.
3. Thesis: “Not to put too fine of a point on it, the labels are largely
meaningless” on the first page, at the end of the first paragraph.
II. Summary
1. In “Good
English and Bad” Bryson explains how there is no right or wrong ways to use
English because of the simple fact the “rules” and language are constantly
changing.
2. There is not good or bad English,
you can make up your own rules as a writer as long as the reader knows what
your talking about.
III. Burkean Palor/Intertextuality
1. This
article relates mainly to the Dawkins article because both articles try and
change our views on the idea of not following English rules closely because of
how rapidly the rules can change.
IV. Personal reflection
1. Bryson
made me question a lot about what I know and how I use English rules. I think
this made me realize that the English language is constantly changing and that
following the rules closely is a waste of time.
2. I
really don’t feel like he had much evidence to support his claims at times
which to me made his argument invalid, but at the same time it did get me to
start questioning English rules and why they even exist.
2.) Does font change the way we
understand and interpret text?
I think that font can sometimes change
the way we interpret text. Looking at a bland size 12 Times new Roman font on a
paper tells me that the article is going to be boring while lacking a visual
identity. If the font is colorful and larger it makes it easier to read and
connect to.
IV. Personal Reflection
1.) I personally liked this article
because it connected to me and my visual learning style. This helped me realize
that this is the type of reading/learning style I enjoy while also teaching me
to look out for this style of writing in many different types of texts.
2.) I didn't like the article because
it was really directed at students. It was directed more to teachers and
educators, so in that sense I felt some what a gap between me and the author.
Dominic, you'll want to be careful to not skip over sections with the new RR format. You labeled the thesis (which is 3) as 2b and skipped answering 2b (If you're not the primary audience...). Also, you skipped over the Burkean Parlor/Intertextuality section. If you wouldn't mind, I'd like for you to edit this post and include those sections. Thanks!
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